Naima B. Robert – Introduction to the Children’s Book Masterclass

Naima B. Robert
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The speakers share a tour of children's book world through a chronological journey, starting with the fact that the writing is fact-based and nonuriative. They give examples of children's picture books, including Hannah's Surprise picture book, and explain that the language used in children picture books is English, not French. The language and language of the book series is English, not French, and is meant to appeal to children at a young age. The audience is then shown a master class on finding your sweet spot in writing for children at a young age.
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In this lesson, I am going to be

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sharing with you some of the wonderful

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variety to be found

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in the children's book world. And if you

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know me, then you know that I absolutely

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love children's books

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And I just cannot get enough of them

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and cannot get enough of talking about them.

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But we are not here just to randomly

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go through children's books.

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I would like to take you on a

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journey

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through the world of children's books by sharing

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just a few examples

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so you can get a feel for what's

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possible, for what's out there, for what's working,

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for

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maybe what your future project would look like.

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So let's do this in a chronological way.

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I'm going to treat fiction and nonfiction,

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the same because there are fiction books for

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children and there are nonfiction books for children.

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Just as a recap, fiction means that the

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story is made up.

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Nonfiction means that it's fact based.

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In between those two, there is creative

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nonfiction,

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which is basically a fact based story

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or a story told in order to teach.

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Okay. We'll see some examples of those inshallah.

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Alright. So let's start with the youngest

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children.

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If you are familiar with children, if you

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have any of your own or if you've

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been to the library and you've seen the

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children's section, you will see that there is

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a section

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especially for the littlest ones

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and that is the babies and toddler section.

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You will find that those books have particular

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characteristics,

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Mainly that they typically have fewer words or

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none at all.

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The illustrations are very vibrant and the books

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are very hardy. And that is for reasons

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that I'm sure I don't have to explain

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to you, mashallah.

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It's pretty clear why those books need to

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be quite hard wearing.

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Now baby and toddler books come under the

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general umbrella

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of picture books. Picture books in general are

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considered to be written for 0 to 5

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years old. Some can stretch above 5 but

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in general,

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they are seen as catering to the 0

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to 5 age group.

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That means that

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language wise, there will be issues with regards

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to how much language is used, how many

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words there are. And in children's in sorry,

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babies and toddlers,

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babies less than 300, Toddlers

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under 500.

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Picture books in general will be about a1000.

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So I have some examples here of some

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picture books. Some this is one of my

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favorites here. It's a bit ratty and nutty.

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But, it's a very beautiful, reassuring

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story

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set in the Inuit culture in, Canada

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about a little girl asking her mama if

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she loves her. So you'll see on the

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inside,

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not too many words,

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quite a simple,

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story, quite simple premise,

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but really, told in a very beautiful way.

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So I will read you just a couple

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of pages inshallah from this one. Again, that's

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the cover.

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And this would be more for toddlers.

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Mama, do you love me?

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Yes I do dear one.

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How much?

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I love you more than the raven loves

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his treasure.

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More than the dog loves his tail

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and more than the whale loves his spout.

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How long?

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I'll love you until the umiak flies into

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the darkness.

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Until the stars turn to fish in the

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sky and the puffin howls at the moon.'

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So this is a fairly sophisticated

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toddlers book, Masha'Allah.

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There are obviously toddler books with just one

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word per page, no words per page.

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DiaZu is a good example of a very

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simple toddler's book with simple illustrations

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and,

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the the examples of that are bound. So

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so many of them.

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Next, we go to preschool,

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And this is where the more typical,

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picture book is, is located.

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So you may be familiar with this book.

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It's now a modern classic. Hannah surprise.

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Obviously it's not created

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for toddlers because it's,

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paperback and toddlers don't do very well with

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paperbacks. But it is a picture book, a

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classic picture book in the sense that the

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pictures

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are a very important part of the storytelling.

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And in fact, in this book in particular,

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the pictures are a crucial part of the

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storytelling because the words don't actually tell what

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is actually happening. It's the pictures that show

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what's happening and then the ending is a

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surprise

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for, the main character, Handa, but not for

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us because we've been seeing the plot unfold

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through the pictures the whole way. But you'll

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see

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the illustrations

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are very vibrant

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and the language is still quite simple.

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Okay? And,

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you know, has a rhythm to it, has

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a sense of repetition to it, which is

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something that we will touch on later in

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the master class. Okay? So that's Hannah's Surprise

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picture book.

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Another classic picture book which is quite different

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to Handa Surprise,

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is this one here. You may be familiar

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with it.

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That's Judith Kurz, the tiger who came to

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tea.

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And this is a classic in the UK,

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because it's a very off the wall story.

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But I'll read you the first part so

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you'll see what I mean.

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Once there was a little girl called Sophie

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and she was having tea with her mummy

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in the kitchen.

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Suddenly,

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there was a ring at the door.

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Sophie's mummy said,

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'I wonder who that can be.

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It can't be the milkman

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because he came this morning.

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And it can't be the boy from the

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grocer because this isn't the day he comes.

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And it can't be daddy

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because he has his keys.

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We'd better open the door and see.'

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Sophie opened the door

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and there

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was a big,

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furry,

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stripy

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tiger.

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The tiger said,

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'Excuse me.

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But I'm very hungry.

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Do you think I could have tea with

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you?'

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Sophie's mummy said, of course,

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come in. And you'll have to read the

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rest of the book to find out what

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the tiger ends up doing. But that's an

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example of

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a well loved children's picture book that has

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an element of fantasy and imagination,

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and but based in a very domestic setting.

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And we will go into the kind of,

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stylistic

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traditions

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found in different children's books later on in

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the master class. Right now we're just taking

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a little look.

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So

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after the picture books, I do believe, I

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have some picture books that are nonfiction as

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well.

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Think of an Eel is one of them.

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And I shared this in the extra training.

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This is written in a more prose poetry

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style. So it's creative nonfiction but it is

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nonfiction. It's not, it's not a narrative story.

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And,

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yeah. It's,

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I'll just read you a little bit of

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it so you can see but get a

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feel for the language.

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Eel swims for 3 years till he reaches

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the shore but the river's too cold.

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There's still snow on the mountains.

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So he waits in the water.

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Turns into an elver.

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Now he looks like a shoelace made out

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of glass.

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The next one.

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When spring warms the shoreline, the smell of

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fresh water excites the glass elver.

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Into the river he swims like a mad

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thing. He wriggles up rapids,

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climbs rocks around waterfalls.

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Riverbanks

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guide him. Nothing will stop him.

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So that's just, like, a taste of the

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wonderful language

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in the, in this particular series of books.

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But this here is a picture book but

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it's nonfiction. Okay? And I have another example

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of a nonfiction

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picture book

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and that is, this one here.

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And this is more like a textbook. Okay.

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So I shouldn't call it a picture book,

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really. It's more like a textbook. Alright. So

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you'll see it is written for children. And

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this is the amazing thing about nonfiction,

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in children's books. People really, really overlook the

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value of nonfiction

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And especially

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presenting facts in an exciting and creative way.

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I think this is a trick that many,

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many of us are missing and I'd love

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to see more creative non fiction coming from

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us Muslim writers. But you'll see here

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you can see it's quite a simple setup.

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There's the main piece of artwork

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and then there's information

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about the, the artist. And there'll be some

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cartoons here as well to illustrate other things.

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There'll be, you know, some Internet links.

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And obviously, it's written in a way that

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is meant to appeal to children, to their

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sense of curiosity, their sense of excitement,

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and there's also,

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some activities that they can do. And I

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cannot wait to dive into the nonfiction,

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segment with you guys because it's actually really,

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really exciting. Masha'Allah.

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Right. So we're moving up now to early

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readers.

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Early readers

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are higher age group than, picture books. Early

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readers are written for the child to read

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them themselves. Okay? So the language has to

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be pitched to the reading level of the

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child, not the age. So this is an

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example of an early reader. As you can

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see, very, very simple. So can I? And

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all through the book it's actually very, very,

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very simple.

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Illustrations still play an important part because at

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this age children are still, you know, really

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really interested in the illustrations.

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So you can see there, push and pull.

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Push and pull.

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Pull

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and push.

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And my daughter actually learned to read with

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these particular books so there you go. They

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do work. This example might be more familiar

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to you guys.

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Yep. It's Peter and Jane.

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And obviously, we know Peter and Jane is

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based on the keywords in the ladybird reading

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series.

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So reading series and early readers are much

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stricter when it comes to the vocabulary that

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you can use.

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Story wise, there's a bit of flexibility, but

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early readers, it's all about

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giving the children

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the story in the words that they are

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able to read or can learn to read.

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So,

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yep. Here comes Peter. Here comes Jane. We

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know how that goes.

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Right. And then moving up from early readers,

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we're getting to

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chapter books, which are basically for 6 to

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9 year olds.

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I've got this one here by Judy Blume.

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Not sure whether you're familiar with her. She's

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a very famous

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and celebrated American author.

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And you'll see that in chapter books now,

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the stories are split into chapters.

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And they

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have illustrations.

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Okay? Illustrations are still an important part of

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things

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in the early the young readers age, so

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the chapter book age. So, you'll see this

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one is not very thick. Okay? It's not

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very long and there are

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slightly longer than that. There is some flexibility

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there but you're bearing in mind that you

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are writing for basically 6 to 9 year

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olds. And then,

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up from that, you have the 9 to

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12 year olds and this is the middle

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grade

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section.

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Middle grade

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encompasses books like The Muslims by Zainab Meehan.

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Okay.

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Middle grade obviously is longer.

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The chapters are longer. They often will rely

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less on illustration.

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Okay? So you've got The Muslims by Zainab

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Meehan. You've got this one by Beverly Naidu

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as well, another classic

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of world literature, really, Journey to Joburg. And

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so you see in here, in this chapter

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book, illustrations are very, very minimal. Okay. You

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see that illustration and then you don't see

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illustrations for a long time. Okay. And obviously

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the story is more mature.

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There is more to the story in terms

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of plot, in terms of character development.

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Now you're getting into more novel style writing.

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Okay?

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And then, we've got other books like this

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which is, you know, a story book that's

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obviously written for children but is historical.

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And,

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obviously illustrations

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are a really important part of it but

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the main thing is that it's written for

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children at children's level. So, hey,

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there is too much variety and that was

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not even the tip of the iceberg. Insha'Allah,

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as we go through this master class, I

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will be introducing you to more and more

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wonderful books so that you can feel empowered

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to see where your sweet spot is. What

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kind of books do you lean towards? Do

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you like funny books? Do you like moving

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books? Are you drawn to a particular illustration

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style? Are you drawn to a particular type

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of plot or character or storytelling style?

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Through the masterclass, you'll get a chance to

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find out what your sweet spot is and,

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possibly base your story in that area where

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you feel the most comfortable. See you in

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the next lesson. Assalamu alaykum.

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